Museum is a place where all unique and fossils stored. Thus, making the future generations know how ancestors led there life. Now-a-days, it is frequently thought that these sites should only store pieces of there own nation on the contrary not others. In this essay I will give my contradictions for this.
On one hand, art gallery shows how the previous people spent there life, and also how much we changed from them. It is not about one's own country but the past. Since only our neighborhood can't define in what manner we developed we need other communities also. For instance, in my state our grandparents used only red or blue colors for decoration. Whereas when I went to Chennai in the painting exhibition, I found out they used yellow and various kinds in it which are not known to us in the old days. Therefore, I came to know that every part has its own variety of things.
On other hand, each land has there own spieces which got vanished from the planet. The fossils of dinosaurs are not found in my birth place. However, they can be found in other parts of the world. Once I went to Mumbai, where international museum is present, as a part of my school tour. Without this visit I can never see the bone structure of dinosaur gave foot steps in Africa. Since I went to that place only I can know how the parts of creature were.
To conclude, as there are minor drawbacks in having all kinds of things from various parts of the earth, which are not so breathtaking. The advantages are huge consequently I accept to the concept of having arts from all over the planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
...these sites should only store pieces of there own nation on the contrary not others. In t...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ot about ones own country but the past. Since only our neighborhood cant define in wh...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...t the past. Since only our neighborhood cant define in what manner we developed we n...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... we developed we need other communities also. For instance, in my state our grandpar...
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Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
...hings. On other hand, each land has there own spieces which got vanished from the pla...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of dinosaur gave foot steps in Africa. Since I went to that place only I can know ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51736111111 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44936915143 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6912611328 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2777777778 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0452282714098 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0143261323845 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262079497501 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0283989773642 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257396543012 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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