Nowadays increase in the infrastructure and other facilities, people are showing keen interest in cities rather than villages. It is frequently argued by numerous that individuals are moving towards metropolitans. Where there less social life compared to countryside. This essay delves the advantages and disadvantages of being in downtown without knowing citizens.
As a matter of fact for a proper living we need all facilities. These can be found in major parts of the country and not in villages. With this individuals are taking risk to migrate without proper relationship in that area. For instance. to educate in best schools, which can be found in cities, parents need to settle in that area. This happened even in my life. My parents were from small tribal area. After I was born they moved to nearby suburban area. However. they don't know anyone in the migrated area. All because of having healthy livelihood for the future. Therefore, this gives more opportunities despite of suffering socially at present.
On the other hand, all human beings need someone with whom we can share our thoughts. Furthermore, if anyone faces a problem they need help from relatives or friends. This can happen when we know people from our community.
If we don't have proper communication with the people we live along with we feel lonely, and even feels sick mentally. For example, in the case of pregnant women where no one's knows when emergency situation occurs. She needs be surrounded by people whom she can trust or put life on. But, this can only happen in their own place and not a place where they don't know anyone. Therefore, without knowing others can have many drawbacks in one's life.
To summarise, considering growth in economic manner and having luxurious life, migrating is beneficial. In contrast it comes with some drawbacks. Depending on the individual this can have optimistic view or negative side.
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- It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child s development are media pop culture and friends A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
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- Museums and art galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their own country rather than works of the other parts in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in contrast, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04731861199 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70233053738 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593059936909 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5061397376 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.0 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.68 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162634886955 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415848837929 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418299630631 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865178028495 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544215725423 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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