In this fast growing world education is an essential for everyone, it help person to grow independently. There are a number of cases where people don't able to complete their education due to financial problems or some of them has to work for their education expenses, which can engender students under pressure. This essay will discuss the causes and suggestion for pupils.
To begin with, we all understand how education is vital for everyone. There are a number of reasons when pupils have to work to continue their education, and the most important fact is related to non-financial support. As per a recent survey by Oxford University, resulted about 25% pupils leave their schooling due to the financial crisis, and 30% of students continue their study but has to work for their expenses. However, it's not easy to manage study while working, hence they feel constantly under pressure, which can have an adverse effect on their performance.
It is worth to considering the above facts and problems, but there can be some possible solutions for the same. The Government and education institutes can work together and try to solve these issues for deserving candidates and can have some schemes or scholarship which can bare student's expenses and help them to independent.
This essay discussed why student feel under pressure while work, as well as possible solution. As per my prospective, before going for work students has to look for another options to continue their study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, look, so, well, while, as to, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08163265306 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69067837248 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583673469388 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8832127821 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.181818182 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293608203901 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11941823394 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550874878077 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191001297265 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460431055435 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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