Some think that children should start school as early as possible, while others believe that they should start school at the age of seven.Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
In this modern era, it is irrefutable that education is crucial, its value has been constantly increasing in the world by leaps and bounds.Few people believe that children should join school as early as possible, while other group of people pursue that they should start at the age of seven.Both views have its own pros and cons.Both views and my opinion are discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
One school of thought believe it's better to start schooling at four age, first one is that if children start very early age then there are more chance to succeed and easy to acquire knowledge and understanding of information.Secondly they are more engaged in extra curricular activities and encourage them to develop and improve knowledge earlier than who attends school at the age of seven.
On the other hand, some people argue that children must have their free childhood till age of seven.Childhood comes once in life hence should be spent as much as possible with parents and friends.Moreover playing, communication with parents and friends are very important.Such kindness, good sense of humor and self confidence can not be gained from only studying.This intersection become less after children start school, because they get busy in their homework project and other activities.
Furthermore, the early age is very essential aspect, because they are beginners and at the learning age.Therefore more stress and homework ruin and stop their growth at some mental and physical levels.Moreover they have many years to study even if they start at seven.
This, to conclude, in my opinion parents must took their children in school at the age of seven.However, it depends upon parents choice, if both parents worked at job then its better to put their children at age four.Otherwise, it would be better to send children to school at the age of seven.
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- Some think that children should start school as early as possible while others believe that they should start school at the age of seven Discuss both the views and give your own opinion 56
- Some think that children should start school as early as possible while others believe that they should start school at the age of seven Discuss both the views and give your own opinion 56
- Some think that children should start school as early as possible while others believe that they should start school at the age of seven Discuss both the views and give your own opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10163934426 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96551894393 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537704918033 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.1373820386 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 311.2 106.682146367 292% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.0 20.7667163134 294% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.6 7.06120827912 363% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.49004476392 0.244688304435 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.269533880816 0.084324248473 320% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831290358348 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269533880816 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831290358348 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 13.0946893788 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.02 50.2224549098 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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