Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
The climate is changing year by year, thus, many people encourage about it because this changing might be bring negative situations. Other type of people think that their issues may be chance for improving business.
On the one hand, climate change is better way for creating some new technology or business sector. Nowadays, majority of people use the air condition almost all season, because the summer or other seasons are getting very hot and cold every year, as a result of which the demand for these household equipments is growing considerably. Therefore, many technology companies are producing for the necessary needs of the house. In addition, garment factories are also relying on these changes to make quality and comfortable garments even in extreme cold, and these type of companies are developing their businesses utilizing climate change wisely.
On the other hand, the weather changing is bring various natural disastrous and environmental problems. For example, if a lot of snow falls in the winter and snow accumulates in the mountains, in result, this snow can melt and cause water flooding. Scientist believe, the number of different diseases is improving in the world and the main reason for this is climate change. In this way, most of medical companies are gaining good experience and more revenue.
In conlusion, in my percpective view is that weather change has created many opportunities for people and led to the creation of various technologies. In short, these challenges have taught people to survive in any situation and build their own business despite the negative reason.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...the other hand, the weather changing is bring various natural disastrous and environm...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o the creation of various technologies. In short, these challenges have taught peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in short, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23938223938 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7144312532 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.960632004 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.083333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213061918308 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770317158496 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513826977642 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126381856319 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355622512931 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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