Nowadays, by developing industrial cities around the world, environment pollution is one of the most important challenges in majority of societies and there is a big debate between governments and private companies a bout responsibility of pollution cleanup.
Most environmental researches reveal that in industrial areas the chart of air pollution is ascend by increasing number of industries. Environmental experts believe that because of companies and industries role in pollution they should not neglect their responsibilities in environment problems and the burden of pollution cleanup is with private companies undoubtedly. These expert emphasize that private companies should spend more money and time to eliminate pollution cause and prevent increasing environmental problems.
In the other hand, most business experts believe that to facilitate production, the government should support companies in variety of hardships such as pollution problems. In addition companies managers believe that cost of pollution cleanup is very expensive for them and lack of money sources don`t let them to do it properly. Some of them don`t predict environmental cost in their budget annually and prefer to spend money in their other problems like supplying materials and employees salary.
In conclusion, pollution cleanup is an essential need in people`s life and it should done in a suitable way.in my opinion the governments should devise a plan to vanish pollution by utilize participating companies and organizations. Without special predicted plan to decrease pollution and urgent program to solve this problem it is undeniable that pollution will be the first issue on people`s life in future. To achieve a suitable solution, companies and governments should change their attitude to cooperation system by spending enough money and time.
- Some people believe that manufacturersand supermarkets should minimise thepackaging material used. However, othersthink that consumers should avoidheavily packaged goods. Discuss bothviews and give your opinion. 78
- The diagram shows how geothermal energy is used to produced electricity. 67
- In many countries, young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities. What do you think are reasons of these? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- Nowadays many people believe that children should be taught history in schools however others argue that children should learn subjects that are more helpful for modern everyday life Discuss both views and give your opinion 60
- some people think subjects taught in school are a waste of time, while others disagree and believe that this type of education is useful for students.discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'ascended'.
Suggestion: ascended
...ial areas the chart of air pollution is ascend by increasing number of industries. Env...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ardships such as pollution problems. In addition companies managers believe that cost of...
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Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have done' or 'do'?
Suggestion: have done; do
...eed in people's life and it should done in a suitable way.in my opinion the gov...
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Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a suitable way" with adverb for "suitable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...n people's life and it should done in a suitable way.in my opinion the governments should de...
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Line 4, column 411, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e the first issue on people's life in future. To achieve a suitable solution, compan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19413512137 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534545454545 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.8759097758 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.5 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276445913771 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119350314645 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494180975607 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168735873492 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383230135904 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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