The ability to master an art form is a unique quality in itself. Many people think that anybody can produce a piece of art and it do not take any special skills or talent in doing so, where as others argue this. I do not agree with the statement, a person can be good in a particular field only with sheer determination and passion. And skills required to produce a perfect form of art can only be achieved by practicing.
People who thinks that anyone can become a good artist favors it due to innate ability with predisposed gene. Many famous artist pass down genes to the next generation, giving them the advantage to succeed in the field like them. However, it is not correct for everyone, many big musicians and actors children do not reach the success ladder like their parents. For instance, Bollywood's superstar Mr. Amitabh bachchan's son Abhishek Bachchan could not follow his father's footstep in this industry. Even though they have an advantage of an innate quality, but without proper practice, training and learning no one can achieve the heights in a particular field.
On the other hand there are many people who do not have any paternity relation to an art form have succeed by acquiring the required talent and skills. Many musician have gained lot of popularity from a very young age. This is because of their sheer determination in practicing music right from the start. People cannot become good musician without learning and practicing right chords and melody. Also, painting is one of the rare art form that not everyone can do. A painter needs to have a lot of patience to complete their painting and it requires special skills to produce a unique piece of art.
In conclusion, I believe, it is not everyone's cup of tea to succeed in different form of arts. It is undeniably true that one requires special skills that can be achieved through years of practice to get a perfect piece of music, song or painting. So, only a determined mind and passion can help an artist to become the best one.
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- Some people think that new technology always improves the lives of workers Other people believe that it results in disadvantages for workers Discuss both the views and give your opinion 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
...ybody can produce a piece of art and it do not take any special skills or talent i...
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Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...y special skills or talent in doing so, where as others argue this. I do not agree with ...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
... paternity relation to an art form have succeed by acquiring the required talent and sk...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun musician seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many musicians'.
Suggestion: Many musicians
...quiring the required talent and skills. Many musician have gained lot of popularity from a ve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71267605634 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50114197286 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512676056338 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0851081809 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9444444444 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197734183889 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629679865099 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061760432305 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125949363271 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651940672173 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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