Online education has make it possible to study anything regardless the place, age and subjects. Some universities providing their education over online. Though It have some drawbacks, the benefins of are the most.
To begin with, online education have enormous benefits for the people's of all walks of life. To illustrate, in online, people can receive their preferred courses in their free time at any place in their computer or even in mobile phone. Now, for example, i am taking a graphic designing course sitting at home and learnig lots of crucial things without going far away. Moreover, we also can take any course that is given by any foreign university or college. For this, we have no longer need to go abroad for taking knowledge. Consequently, it is saving our money and time both, people are getting their desired subjects without any kind of problem.
In other words, persons who are unlikely to go to schools or university just for their old age and business, the are also receiving education in their computer. To give an example, In USA more than 25 thousand housewives take various courses as per their choice in a year, which is quite impossible with traditional education. As a result of this, huge amount of people are getting educated.
However, It is sometimes hard for some one to get this online education besause it requers at least a smart mobile phone or laptop which was not possible for poor people to buy it. Furthermore, the courses are also so expensive.
In conclustion, thugh online learning have some costing issues, it is a great way to educate all people of all across the globe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, at least, for example, kind of, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86330935252 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5793248178 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597122302158 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1610668218 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286991387317 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962738851952 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403065340813 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152620959027 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339254960151 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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