Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online.
Is this a positive or negative development?
It is true that online courses are going viral in several universities and colleges nowadays.While i accept that internet-based learning can sometimes have some negative impacts, i believe that they are more likely to have positive effects.
On the one hand,there are several influences in studying via the internet.Firstly,student is less direct face-to-face with their teacher and will have to rely on written forms of communication.Because when having courses on the internet ,they will approach computer on smart phone to access it and watch lectures which were uploaded by teachers.Similarly , students who study online may not have opportunities to contact with other students,this could affects on support in study process.A good example for this is that traditional courses help students discuss their subjects in classroom or over coffees after lessons.However,online learners will be restricted by chatting through website forum areas.Secondly,online courses also make students lack of motivation and element of competition when they only stay at home and sit in front of computer to gain knowledge. It is not easy for them to concentrate on lectures and interact directly that face-to-face groups can bring.
On the other hand, I would argue that these benifits are outweighted by the drawbacks.Courses on the internet are the great tools in order that students could study in flexible ways whenever and wherever is convenient which is a need for students to control and manage with their workload.In addition, fees in school will be reduced including material facilities ,electricity and water money,which could diminish finacial burden in each families when they have childrens in school ages .Furthermore,online courses also creat chances for people ,regardless of age,location and background.For instance, my uncle is 65 years old and is living in other country but he also has participated ielts courses to improve his language level by registing an account on the english website.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential benefits of are more significant than the disadvantages .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52321981424 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63443882355 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61919504644 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 333.238293118 49.4020404114 675% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 356.8 106.682146367 334% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.6 20.7667163134 311% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.8 7.06120827912 479% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190517144789 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900905930758 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694319617129 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104441651283 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714399296588 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.9 13.0946893788 282% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.94 50.2224549098 -4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.16 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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