Yes,of course there is the change in the technology since some decades.Those technology helps us to improve our work and also gives us many negative things.For example many people become lazy due to the advanced technology.There is positive example such as people can get knowledge from the technology.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Dhruvil_Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, for example, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 41.998997996 14% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 257.0 1615.20841683 16% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 48.0 315.596192385 15% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35416666667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.6321480259 4.20363070211 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12354132623 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 38.0 176.041082164 22% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.791666666667 0.561755894193 141% => OK
syllable_count: 88.2 506.74238477 17% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 257.0 106.682146367 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.0 20.7667163134 231% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 41.0 7.06120827912 581% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115142110394 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115142110394 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115142110394 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.8 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.84 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 78.4519038076 15% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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