Some universities offer online courses for students. Do you think this is a positive or negative development for students?

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Some universities offer online courses for students. Do you think this is a positive or negative development for students?

Some educational institutes offer internet based course that substitute traditional classes. In my opinion,I believe it is a positive development as online based courses help students to attend classes efficiently.

One possible benefit of providing online courses to students is that the barrier of distance could be erased. In other words, today most students from remote areas can get better education while sitting at their homes. As a result, their transportation cost and time could be saved to a large extent. For instance, according to survey conducted in USA by researchers indicates that 69% students prefer to do online study as compared to formal class.

Another benefit of attending online classes is that it is inexpensive mode of getting education. As in today's competitive environment, internet is becoming quite common and less expensive. Having internet connectivity at every home makes students to get education at a cheaper rates. Moreover, it also benefit universities at worldwide with reduced investment.

Finally, getting computer based education help students to do part-time job. Most youngsters want to fulfill their basic needs and for that they have to join some companies and earn their livelihood.In this way they can give equal time to study and work. So that's why this trend is popular in today's world.

In conclusion, introduction of online courses proves beneficial to the youngsters as it is convenient, inexpensive and make youth to do some part-time work.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43404255319 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94399204833 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4380328491 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2142857143 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262175526243 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793936703793 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603706071398 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140595392889 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055327869169 0.056905535591 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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