Society is experiencing problems like crime and drug abuse in the field of urbanisation. give suggestions related to this trend.
It is an undeniable fact that today's societies are facing problems like crimes and drug addiction because of modernisation. To overcome such issues possible solutions like making stringent laws and creating more job opportunities for the people.
The first possible solution to minimise crime rate and drug abuse is by making strict laws by the government. In other words, government must pass strict laws such as imposing heavy penalities and send criminals to the prison. Apart from it, proper awareness camps organised to educate people about the consequences of such evils that leads to curb illegal activities and common public will become more responsible and civilized citizens. For instance, in USA government has formulated strict rules and indirectly have positive impact that reduce crime rates to a large extent. So by following such laws, there will be a peaceful environment.
Another possible solution to reduce criminal and drug activities from the society is to create employment. Unemployed people face many difficulties as they are indulging in committing such crimes and consuming drugs. For this, government should give more job prospects for people to earn their own livelihood and make them more responsible.For example, in developing countries where people are unemployed, crime rate and drug addictive evils are at the peak.
To close, to eradicate the social evils from the society, administration must make laws and create more jobs for the unemployed youth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, apart from, as for, for example, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4525862069 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85822017389 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60775862069 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.78931033 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143112494019 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595279735686 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686663373277 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903069563668 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665084181709 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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