Some of the world’s languages are now spoken very little, so steps should be taken to prevent their complete decline. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
it is considered that at the same time there are languages which are dying out and in order to avoid this, steps should be taken. it seems to me that language is a major part of culture of nation and all languages should be defended, no matter how often it is used.
On the one hand, there are many regions in the world where people communicate in a tongue which got from ancestor and is not widely used by others. Especially in areas that are inhibited a long time ago such as Central Africa, North Australia and also Eastern Siberia and all these domains are part of country in which there is a national language. By reason of this fact people in this region have to speak in speech generally used instead of their native language. this means that not only tongue is being forgot but also culture and national values of this nation. And those who support this attitude cite languages which are already died. Proponents of this point of view claim that all languages which are endanger should be protected by different ways and firstly government have to take steps to do this. Finally, to prevent their complete decline linguists should develop measures which can help to resume applying of languages.
On the another hand, in today’s globalization world all human beings adapt to one language to communicate effectively and easily. Even if French and German languages concede to English, it is so difficult to safe a dying tongue.
To summarise, it seems that it possible to protect an endangered language and find some ways to do this but unfortunately it is so hard and need to put a lot of effort.
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...o hard and need to put a lot of effort.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71126760563 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5218643189 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556338028169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.190004352 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203068761779 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770946477422 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500599810347 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132465307339 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276883677801 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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