Someone once said that children are the future, these children are the ones who will grow up to be the leaders of tomorrow. However, having more than one child could be less enjoyable for some parents. Discuss what are advantages OR disadvantages of having more than one child in a family.
Children are the generation who holding a key of future world. It is often argued that having more than one kid is limited the delightful for part of family. I completely agree with this opinion that there is numerous drawbacks of its issue.
First of all, it is expensive to have more children as the needed of each child is disparate and the cost for living is also double. For example, infrastructure for teens can be pricey like more computers, vehicles, education,…
In the order hand, having multiple children requires lots of energy. That means you will not have enough times for yourselves. Because they all want attention at the same time. If you cannot balance the nurture between two of them, it leads to jealousies and squabbles. Case in point, manifold brothers will not yield their favorite toys to their siblings so it will produce arguments. And the parents must waste a few hour to reconcile for them.
Besides, having exceed kids can boost the problem of population growth, which is caused many difficulties such as employment opportunities, environmental and serious social problems. A study by the BBC news showed that the developing countries accounted for 95 percent of population increase while residential land area remains the same.
In conclude, it appear to me that having more than one child contains considerably obstacles. So, we should only have one kid for the sustainable community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, so, while, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09361702128 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79050968798 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68085106383 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1632517237 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294483384606 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092245731367 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743869247259 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157345866123 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688904129564 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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