Space research is a waste of money. The government should spend money on improving conditions of people living on Earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, many may hold the view that the government should invest money in better living standard on Earth rather than outer space exploration because exploring outer space is a waste of money. At the same time, however, there is a body of opinion which claims that space research is necessary. In this essay I will examine both sides of the debate to seek a conclusion.
To begin with, it is undeniable that the government should better medical services on Earth, since it can alleviate the long-standing problems, such as low quality of medicine, lack of professional doctors and outdated medical devices. In addition, the nation ought to provide students with more education opportunities, as better education can help students to learn professional knowledge with great ease and to be armed with employable skills, which can further allow them to survive and thrive in the society.
On the other hand, however, engaging in space research can help the government find a planet hospitable to humans in the future, which is the best way to solve the over-population on Earth. Furthermore, although there will be a chance in a million that scientists find another planet like the Earth, they are more likely to discover new energy resources, which can solve the current issue of energy crisis.
To summarize, there is no doubt that it is significant for the government to improve people living standard, while outer space exploration can also benefit the government. In the final analysis, therefore, one can only conclude that countries should solve all the problems on Earth before they explore the universe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
Nowadays, many may hold the view that the government shoul...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the current issue of energy crisis. To summarize, there is no doubt that it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14772727273 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77886543215 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4037853446 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204481087978 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830082973029 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819322919995 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124698469033 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785322652633 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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