In spite of the advance made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
There is a fact that huge part of world population is hungry nowadays no matter modern development of farming. I think those who are still hungry today are living in various regions of the world which has not developed its agriculture department enough. Also, there must be solutions to solve this issue. For example, development of farming which will not require too much budget on its government.
Although modern agriculture development has reached its peak nowadays, there are some issues such as excess rainfall or drought, weakness of soil, misuse of chemical fertilizers, pesticides and so on. Thus some region in the world can't afford crop which has been produced by advanced agriculture due to its cost and far distance.
We need develop agriculture in the regions which have not developed farming in order to let world has no hungry person. It means that agriculture industries should be established in the future will be not great in their size but will be self-sufficient, convenient to supply enough yield its region.
Weakness of farming soil and irrigation are big issue in agriculture industry nowadays in spite of advances of this industry. To cope with this big issues, world countries need to collaborate in my opinion.
Finally, if humans develop agriculture which is less harmful for soil and implement convenient irrigation in each regions of the world, number of people who re hungry will be reduced. Climate change also influences agriculture industry significantly, thus human race also need to cooperate to tackle this arising global issue. If we use water as low as we can and emit carbon dioxide also less, we will help our world.
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- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this the case?What can be done about this problem? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ical fertilizers, pesticides and so on. Thus some region in the world cant afford cr...
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Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nd so on. Thus some region in the world cant afford crop which has been produced by ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to crop'
Suggestion: to crop
...us some region in the world cant afford crop which has been produced by advanced agr...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, still, thus, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06934306569 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78981358386 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587591240876 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6586580075 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140210223065 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595566096052 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420236523849 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884440218573 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427969062089 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.