In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many peopie around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Nowadays,the agriculture saw dramatic improvement and new methods and machines use to increase both quality and quantity of productions. In many region of world various machines help people to save time and increase farming performance. However by usage of these methods and instruments,the food production is not enough for all human who live in undeveloped countries and suffer from lack of food and malnutrition. In this essay I will investigate the causes of this problem and propose some solution.
The first cause is significant growth in population of our planet. Although in numberless developed countries the birth rate was demolished,in developing countries and also undeveloped country,it has seen a considerable increase especially during this decade. To addressed this problem,I think the government should improve level of education in this field to teach couples how they can avoid from unexpected child. For instance the statistics illustrate that five thousands child borned in Africa because couples not aware of the relation between couple's sex and being born of infants! The other cause is climate changes. However changes are certainly caused by people who live in developing countries,especially in extended towns,this problem affected all around the world and caused massive problems. For example the UN announced that 27 per cent of gardens in Africa were destroyed by global warming. That's clear that many of us,are responsible of this destruction. I think we must change our habits on transportation and the government should build enogh infrastructures for big towns.
Third cause is poverty among hungry people. Many people nowadays not only aren't afford to eat organic,fresh,natural nutrients but also can't feed themselves and their families. To tackle with this problem I propose the government and local councils should make a list of poor persons who can't feed enough themselves and subsidise them to buy natural ingredients.
To some up,although the agriculture was saw significant improvement, but people still suffer from lack of food and this problem has various causes such as rocketed up the birth rate,unexpected weather changes and extended prevalence of poverty among people. However this problem is serious but has solutions to eradicate it. Unless the UN can solve this problem , the situation will become worse and worse. I personally think the most responsibility is lied with international institutions and developed nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, third, for example, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51052631579 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17598533379 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573684210526 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7816442581 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.210526316 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185468519179 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591944286722 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608682753458 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112858999646 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361183380179 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.