In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this thr case?
What can be done about this problem?
In the modern times, an increasing concern for the society is hunger. In the 21st century, enormous changes took place in agriculture. However, many people are still not getting their meals on time. There are several reasons for this situation. Although, some primitive steps should be taken to overcome this issue. Both the causes and solutions are discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
There are wide range of causes for increasing hunger in the world. The foremost one is corruption. It has been proven that corrupt nations has greater number of hungry people. Although governments reserve food for the poorers, but some corrupt officials are the main interruptions for the needy individuals. They unable poorers to utilize granted resources. In addition, changing in an environment plays vital role in farming; hence, sometime unnecessary raining destroyed the crops and even spoil food, which in turn leads to increasing hunger index.
Despite these, some productive measures could be taken to tackle this situation. The main solution is that governments should take some vital decision for the corruption. Authorities must be ensure that the food resources are utilised by the needy citizens. For instance ,Indian government implies 'Direct to Home' policy for the distribution of meals and this policy has great impact on black market. furthermore, society is divided into two classes .which are poor and rich. Wealthy people should donate sufficient amount of money for the humanity campaign. This campaign is worth taking if people will run this by their own.
In conclusion, increasing hunger is the complex issue with no easy solutions. if Government and wealthy people will follow mentioned solutions, there are great chances to overcome this phenomenon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40433212996 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6721581733 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4118624193 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2857142857 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1904761905 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144309805459 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043386782392 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524955888443 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900881824898 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045879196911 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.15 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 10.7795591182 37% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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