There are many things that motivate a person to work, but money is the most compelling. In your opinion, how influential is the power of money?
In this highly competitive era of today, money plays a vital role in the individuals life. Several commentators are of the view that there are many things which motivate people to hard work, but most vital thing is wealth of money. In my opinion the power of money is influential to a great extent, except some cases.
There are a wide range of reasons why I believe that banknotes will motivate people for work. The foremost reason is that every single person who is an employee, work hard for the promotions. This is because, upper-level job has higher salary rates; hence, employers are working hard at every moment to earn higher place in the area where they are working. In addition, 'Money prizes' plays an important role to influence the duty of worker. Many companies organise prize distribution event at the end of the year. In that program, they distribute different prizes as well as awards and each winner got money as a reward. Consequently, employees are motivate by that rewards.
A further view-point in supporting this is greediness of humans. To explain it, humans are social animal, which never satisfied with what they have. From a wealthy person to a poor one, everyone wants to expand their property, which in turn motivates them for hard work.
Despite these, there are also some points, which proves that money is not always motivational. Dedicated personalities are still on the earth, which are targeting to get their goals without expecting money. A good illustration of this is sport persons. They are always have an eye on their performance and to represent their country in the international competitions. Their only aim is to bright their nation's name in the world. Even they are not get paid a big amount of money , but they are always motivated by the goals they want to achieve.
In conclusion, money is a thing which is very relevant to a modern society. Most of the world's population are working hard to get good amount of money and fulfill their needs. However, there are also a group of people who are dedicated and motivated by their ambitions.
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Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...levant to a modern society. Most of the worlds population are working hard to get good...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84636871508 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62615453507 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536312849162 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.297564448 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.8636363636 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315908372335 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873070618395 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822672734438 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189293075359 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11575759798 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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