Over these years, famine has been one of the most important topics that many countries are concerned about. Despite the fact that many scientists have already developed some farming methods, lots of people in impoverished countries are still starving. To delve deeply into this issue, this essay will explore the causes of hunger and provide possible solutions to this situation.
In fact, this disturbing phenomenon is attributed to natural disasters and wars. To begin with, drought is the first factor contributing to starvation. There is some evidence that in some countries around the equator, the high temperature and less precipitation are the culprits of serious drought, which in turn will lead to the death of crops. Owing to a series of poor harvests, people will have insufficient food and suffer famine. In addition, warfare is another reason for this predicament. In some war-torn/war-ravaged countries in the Middle East, for example, food that is usually rationed during the wartime is one of the most vital things for the troops. Since a large proportion of food is first provided for the army, civilians are likely to experience food shortage during their daily life.
Despite the negative impacts, the actions that we could take to resolve the problems do exist. In the first place, the United Nations and the WHO should take measures to address the problem of famine since they play a crucial role in securing all people’s health. They can send out some extra food collected from developed countries to those countries ravaged by famine. Meanwhile, scientists have already developed a special irrigation method to deal with the death of crops caused by water shortage, so the United Nations should try to aid those famine-stricken countries in building a farm with that unique irrigation way. Thus, the crisis of starvation might be solved in the long run.
In conclusion, famine is a complex problem that affects a lot of people nowadays. There is no single cause of hunger, but natural disasters and warfare are the two main contributors to it. Nevertheless, the effect of food shortage around the world could be mitigated as long as we put more effort into supporting them with more food and farming techniques.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10354223433 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77749314043 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555858310627 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3839578624 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.055555556 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148288110457 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458430966318 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413708797042 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958965719529 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534083807053 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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