In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
In this globalised world, although there are multiple ways to improve a country's economy hunger has been a major barrier in boosting a country’s economy. Despite the enhancement made in the field of agriculture , populace are starving around the globe. This essay will identify the problems with careful consideration and put forth some solutions to eradicate this perennial menace.
On one hand ,though ancient methods of farming are replaced by sophisticated machinery, hunger is still prevalent. One of the main reasons is due to the rapid decline in the lineage of farmers as well as new entrants to this profession. To cite an example, many descendants of farmers are seeking better opportunities for financial stability and better living conditions. In the recent past, farmers have been losing their lives to natural calamities, and succumbing to financial pressures and losses.
On the other hand, the process of farming has grown in leaps and bounds, with a negligible effect on mass production. Though the workforce for farming is slowly decreasing, introduction of natural fertilizer and hybrid plants will help in facilitating a better yield. For instance, in states like Andra Pradesh, the government has allowed people to cultivate in government lands , thereby buying the produce at a nominal cost and significantly, creating employment opportunities. This has also promoted better sales in retail outlets, as commodities are being sold at an affordable price.
To conclude, this essay analysed how measures can be taken to eradicate hunger by using conventional methods of farming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, well, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43775100402 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01920015801 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642570281124 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5203387466 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.833333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183672089102 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583779871834 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499086237596 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107722192446 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598468259778 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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