In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?
It is undeniable that the progressions made in farmland however, many people all around the world still starve. This essay will discuss main cause associated with famine and suggest available solution.
The principal reason for being hungry around the world is the ever-growing population. In the last decade, the growth rate of population has increased significantly. Whereas, food production is not comparatively increased at the same scale. Next, restaurants, which is cooked food for many people unfortunately, sometimes throw away foods, which is not completely consumed by customers. Leftover food is discarded being avoidance any problems caused by stale food.
In order to solve this problem, firstly, government should control growth of population. It means authorities ought to count number of people in country and decide how many people they can afford with food. Furthermore, restaurants should not cook meal in advance. They must cook the food as per the need of the hour. Managements in restaurant business should avoid wastage of food as much as possible. This will save a huge amount of food every day. Moreover, if restaurant is cooks more food than it is needs they could give for homeless people because it is still a fresh.
In conclusion, overpopulation around the world and wastage of food is main reasons why many people have shortage in food. However, control the number of population in each part of the world and decrease the losses of food in restaurants.
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? 56
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? 67
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this case? What can be done about this problem? 56
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. 56
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...population has increased significantly. Whereas, food production is not comparatively i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21666666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85919265508 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579166666667 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2785830598 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.25 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202674916514 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665099956358 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062593647425 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137534893341 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432857113321 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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