In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case? causes
What can be done about this problem? Solutions
Nowadays, the use of technology has led to great advances and improvements in the field of agriculture; however, we can find a lot of regions in the world that suffer from famines and shortage of essential food supplies. In this essay, we will evaluate the potential causes and try to find out possible and affordable solutions for this overwhelming problem.
The causes of food shortage had many independent reasons. Firstly, the tremendous increase in the population number over the last few years. Actually, the presence of overcrowding areas can overtake the production of certain essential alimentary products; for example, in some countries with overpopulation, the production of wheat and rice is less than the demand. Secondly, the occurrence of droughts or shortage of water can result in the death of plants or at least poor production of food. For instance, in Africa, the countries at the equator often suffer from the deficiency of water supplies inducing a direct impact on the total corps production.
Thinking about a single solution is not a prompt way to overcome such a problem. In other words, we should provide many solutions working at the same time to defeat hunger these days and prevent its occurrence in the future. Initially, we need to put a long-term plane to redistribute the current population in non-crowded areas with sufficient water sources. Simultaneously, the use of contraception should be globally encouraged aiming to decrease the number of population. On the other side, the developed countries should afford aids and support to poor countries or those with food and water crises. Unfortunately, some rich countries don’t provide such help to certain poor areas due to political conflicts.
To sum up, despite the recent advances in the methods of cultivation, many areas around the world have problems related to the unavailability of essential agricultural products. Although the causes of such a problem could be well-defined, the possible solutions are not easy to carry out due to the lack of international cooperation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, well, at least, for example, for instance, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29003021148 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08768423896 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546827794562 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3517609605 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.733333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164933841534 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512153108056 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533400579599 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108558785919 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621672973991 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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