People have many different views about oral communication that has more positive effects than text communication. In my opinion, I completely agree with this idea.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that oral communication is great way to understand what speakers are talking. First, aspiration of speakers aim to audiences who can master the information and most people like children, adults, the old are able to do this. Moreover, listening and speaking is the first thing that all children can do when they were borned . Communication with speaking do not force people to spend much time, for example nowaday, people tend to call together by phone, smart phone or computer, which allow them to excharge information rapidly.
On the other hand, oral communication is more attractive than written communication for some reasons. In term of voice, people can pay attention to any person with a good voice, which make them more relaxing . furthermore, people will get fed of words, sentences when they communicate with text and written communication require them to spend time reading.
In conclusion, it is true that spoken communication is more productive than written communication for its conviences and attractions
- In some countries fast food restaurant and companies give money to school provided that the schools promote their school children products to school children What do you think is the positive and negative in the development of children 56
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29896907216 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02526498645 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2617302275 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328857180389 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138725169369 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114340102239 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228475841599 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921430718066 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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