Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Communication continues to be a controversial topic in the society. Some people believe that it will be more powerful for the information to be exchanged in speech instead of in writing. In my opinion, I disagree with this idea and I will explain them now.
On the one hand, it is true that in various situations, spoken communication is an optimal way to transfer information and to solve immediately. By face to face, people can show their emotion through integrating intonation and face expressions while written language requires amount of time to readers understand the writer’s feeling. Furthermore, in extremely urgent case, when it has a traffic accident, calling an ambulance is more rational to describe the scene situation than sending message to the hospital. Consequently, they need some time to figure out what is happening or maybe they pass this message.
However, in other cases, written communication is more important than speaking between individuals, organizations or countries. For instance, when overseas students need to hire a house to live for several years, they and the landlord have to use their signatures in a mediation agreement. Without contract, if they have disputation, no third side can handle with no evidence. Eventually, since verbal language is sometimes untrustworthy and fragile, landlord might unilaterally terminate the tenancy agreement. In addition, writing appears to be more effective than speaking when the information is too complicated or needs to be understand exactly such as doctors prescriptions.
In conclusion, my own view is that no accept spoken words is more powerful than written words because both of them are equally important, depending on the circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, third, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46691176471 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18082277758 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9627344338 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219592224009 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704724389733 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656608931227 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127869869278 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020712545782 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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