: sport is a big business, with high earnings for professional sports people and a lot of companies involved both financially and other ways. Is it a negative or positive development?
The sport industry has become one of the most profitable areas in the world that it attracts a huge number of investments from sport enterprises in terms of finance and goods recently. I am more convinced that this phenomenon brings in myriad benefits to not only some concerned individuals and corporations but also the improvement of tourism profits.
To commerce with, sponsorship from sport companies creates a win-win commercial situation for the companies itself and professional players. Thanks to this investment, athletes is one of the most well-paid jobs in the world, making it a motivation for those professionals to perform the most out of their capability without worrying about financial problems. In turn, sponsors of sport activities also make a killing since they receive a massive share from selling classical match tickets to audiences. Another huge pay-off for sport goods manufacturer is selling products that sponsored to well-known athletes such as football shoes, clothes, and so on. Taking the brand Nike for example, thanks to the co-operated commercial with football stars in 2010, their sale grew significantly at 20% in the next 2 years, making its products one of the most famous items among football fans.
In addition, investing in sport is also a feasible way to boost up tourism profits. According to statistics, one out of ten people in the world is enthusiastic with at least one particular sport, making these people become high potential target visitors to countries which are famous for sport. In fact, a lot of nations have succeeded in attracting these visitors by the development of sport such as Brazil, England, and Germany. A huge number of sport enthusiasts are willing to pay a visit to the Old Trafford stadium of the football team Manchester United is the concrete evidence for the benefits of investing in sport.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea that the sponsorship of enterprises in the sport industry is doing a wonderful job in financially supporting professional athletes and also developing local tourism benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 535, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'goods'' or 'good's'?
Suggestion: goods'; good's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24107142857 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94373824988 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.943331479 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.75 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276896707344 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104560555527 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623614500201 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165713753134 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640427447498 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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