Althiugh, many people believe that spread of multinational companies and the increase in globalisation produce it good convincing, I think in a reverse manner and agree to the given statement. My inclination is justified in the upcoming Paragraph.
Out of all arguments, the strongest one to prove is the business is becoming increasingly International level and some small companies can get profit with the big companies. In addition, multinational companies do business across the world. The good example is McDonald's company is very popular and it can be seen on high Streets in most cities. Besides, multinational companies can also create opportunity for employment, however it could reduce poverty in developing country. It encourages some multinational companies to investment in less developed countries which is direct prejudice global economy between two nations.
On the other hand, globalisation is not always beneficial to everyone. The multinational companies make a raw material in bulk, so it creates more waste rubbish and pollution which is damage to the environment. Secondly, if built the multinational company in Mega cities that every local sellers can become a very trouble to survive into the global market and it can loss their business. Time and again, many big companies pay very less to their employers and employees can not be confident that they have stable jobs.
In conclude, it can be finally say that the issue of spread of multinational companies and the globalisation produces very benefits the the local retailers and small Shoppers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he globalisation produces very benefits the the local retailers and small Shoppers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3967611336 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12496586551 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587044534413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0205971381 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.083333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266494732604 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986140829505 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791031505139 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179097185432 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052159842044 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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