We are living in the era of globalisation in the 21st century as this has bring out a many beneficial outcomes due to the invention of multinational companies for each and everyone I family agreed With above viewpoint and state my opinion in the ensuring passages
First of all, the wide spread of multinational companies will generate an employment to the local ones so that the person can leave an independent life and then out expenditures. This will ultimately decrease the burden on the government.Furthermore, multinational companies brings foreign goods and stuff and sell them in the local markets. By this the foreign goods are available to the public at a affordable prices. For example there are various IT companies which are Starting a set up by which the people can get the the benefit Also generate employment .
Moreover, the foreign companies are equipped with latest technologies as employers working there would gain more knowledge and will be more skilled. This will Also help the government in generating the income in form of tax which can be raised For the welfare of nation.
On the contemporary view, That due to the multinational companies the goods are are available at cheap cost then in the local markets as this leads to vanishing the local industries markets shops and so on.As there are many people who are still dependent on this for their bread and butter this will cause the huge loss to them.
To Conclude, it can be stated that, the company has brought many health benefits like providing things at very cheap and affordable prices, reducing unemployment ,generating a source of income for government and so on .But also have a negative impact as due to this the street vendors and several industries are blink to extinct.
- The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalisation produce positive effects to everyone Do you agree or disagree 61
- SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT YOUNG PEOPLE SHOULD FOLLOW THE TRADITIONS OF THE SOCIETY WHILE OTHER PEOPLE THINK THAT YOUNG PEOPLE SHOULD BE FREE TO BEHAVE AS INDIVIDUALS DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION 56
- The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalisation produce positive effects to everyone Do you agree or disagree 61
- We have three important parts of education reading writing and math Some people think every child will benefit from a fourth skill added to the list computer skills Do you agree or disagree 56
- Nowadays families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this Why is this happening Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95622895623 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94043995155 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521885521886 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.039696411 49.4020404114 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.0 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.125 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108482284052 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456936450962 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506129191878 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647334925313 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477832388582 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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