We are living in the era of globalisation in the 21st century as this has brought out a many beneficial outcomes due to the invention of multinational companies for each and everyone I family agreed With above viewpoint and state my opinion in the ensuring passages
First of all, the wide spread of multinational companies will generate employment to the local ones so that the person can live an independent life and then out expenditures. This will ultimately decrease the burden on the government. Furthermore, multinational companies bring foreign goods and stuff and sell them in the local markets. By this the foreign goods are available to the public at affordable prices. For example there are various IT companies which are starting a set up by which people can get benefit Also generate employment.
Moreover, the foreign companies are equipped with the latest technology as employers working there would gain more knowledge and would be more skilled. This will Also help the government in generating the income in the form of tax which can be raised For the welfare of the nation.
On the contemporary view, That due to the multinational companies the goods are are available at cheap cost then in the local markets as this leads to vanishing the local industries markets shops and so on.As there are many people who are still dependent on this for their bread and butter this will cause the huge loss to them.
To Conclude, it can be stated that the company has brought many health benefits like providing things at very cheap and affordable price,reducing unemployment,generating a source of income for the government and so on. But also have a negative impact as due to this the street vendors and several industries are blink to extinction .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01694915254 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98100113833 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522033898305 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.96900448 49.4020404114 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.0 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109978900093 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389183910832 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506826532785 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653750919598 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480958357497 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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