Standard of lifestyle has undergone several dramatic changes in the 21st jet century. Presently people are more interesting to buying and wearing innovative goods .so the tendency of this have bath pros and cons .in my opinion, this supposed to be more demerits instead of merits.
Buying and wearing new cloths have some demerits. First and foremost, whenever masses are innovative clothes then these things allure to them because these are very tempting which compel people to buy .hence they spend their major chunk of money to buy these goods .next innovative clothes have send traditional clothes at back seat.To justify, he/she does not like to wear traditional and cultural clothes after buying new clothes . Thus ,they can forget their cultural values.
Furthermore, the tendency of buying new goods lead toward excessive consumerism. Owing to this some ecology concern can be born . for instance , folks through their old things and buy new ones. Some of those are non biodegradable so it can leave profound effect on environment . moreover, elevating the demand of clothes are require to establish industries which are responsible to enormous pollution .Therefore, this approach will be detrimental for future
Although, it has few merits too. To commence with, wearing new clothes enhance the confidence of people . To elaborate, after wearing innovative clothes they feel energetic and younger. Thus , it can boast the morale on anyone . apart from that ,innovative clothes add charm to the personality of people . they think they are walking with modernity . so it leaves good impact on them.
To conclude , although wearing and buying new clothes are some advantages however its demerits are outweigh to their merits. In m opinion people should not spend too much money on clothes and it is rightly said that cut your coat according to your cloth.
Standard of lifestyle has undergone several dramatic changes in the 21st jet century. Presently people are more interesting to buying and wearing innovative goods .so the tendency of this have bath pros and cons .in my opinion, this supposed to be more demerits instead of merits.
Buying and wearing new cloths have some demerits. First and foremost, whenever masses are innovative clothes then these things allure to them because these are very tempting which compel people to buy .hence they spend their major chunk of money to buy these goods .next innovative clothes have send traditional clothes at back seat.To justify, he/she does not like to wear traditional and cultural clothes after buying new clothes . Thus ,they can forget their cultural values.
Furthermore, the tendency of buying new goods lead toward excessive consumerism. Owing to this some ecology concern can be born . for instance , folks through their old things and buy new ones. Some of those are non biodegradable so it can leave profound effect on environment . moreover, elevating the demand of clothes are require to establish industries which are responsible to enormous pollution .Therefore, this approach will be detrimental for future
Although, it has few merits too. To commence with, wearing new clothes enhance the confidence of people . To elaborate, after wearing innovative clothes they feel energetic and younger. Thus , it can boast the morale on anyone . apart from that ,innovative clothes add charm to the personality of people . they think they are walking with modernity . so it leaves good impact on them.
To conclude , although wearing and buying new clothes are some advantages however its demerits are outweigh to their merits. In m opinion people should not spend too much money on clothes and it is rightly said that cut your coat according to your cloth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26845637584 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61344881153 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587248322148 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 83.903475553 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2222222222 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342925206901 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106927562938 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161193598221 0.0667982634062 241% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254537264793 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.323310673297 0.056905535591 568% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.