In some country children start school at the age of 4 and another country at the age of 7 so lme people believe that early school start is affecting parents child relationship
Education being a third eye lay the foundation of a successful career for human beings. Presently,these days people like to send to their children into school at the age of 4 due to their sedentary lifestyle. This happening has few drawbacks. However, it has merits outweigh to its demerits. Here, I would accounts for both cons and pros.
There are manifold causes why going to school at the early age is beneficial. First and foremost, kids can learn basic of ever subject. To justify, going into school allow children to meet new friends who spend time with them. By doing so,offsprings can acquire the virtue of sharing,group discussion and so on which are supposed to be fruitful for their future. Moreover, schools also assist of kids to prevent bad company or bullies because they spend too much time in school. School provides good ambience to children l. So,there is no chance of fall children into bad company. In addition to this,schools do not offer only excellent study to their children,but also teach many respectful virtue of obicience, discipline and so on. Hence,it is a brilliant approach towards kids education. Furthermore, doing study at the early can lead towards a successful career.
Although, it has some drawbacks also. To commence with,when children start going to school at the early age,then they do not have spare time for their parents due to homework. Thus,the bonding between children ams parents can become feeble up to some extent. Next,early education may the hindrance for children to learn moral and ethical values because they do not left time for learning such things. As a result, the tendency of sending kids into schools is futile.
To conclude,schools indeed a crucial for every individual. However, sending children into schools at the early age has few demerits. But, it merits are outweigh to its demerits.
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...ge has few demerits. But, it merits are outweigh to its demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, third, thus, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07166123779 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77944658981 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579804560261 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9635396127 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6956521739 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.347826087 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91304347826 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297192778775 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840884573483 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909721621454 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193042896328 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415125596227 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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