In recent years we have observed that one of the most serious and fundamental problems has to do with environment . It is indicated that people behave very indifferently and do not try to do something on a personal level in order to mitigate this concern. So, what can people do to combat the negative effects that are caused ?
Initially , the Government has tried to set some rules to eliminate the problems but people should be even more serious about this problem. Both the Government and general public have to contribute in solving this concern. Well, first of all, people should use more recycling bins in order to recycle materials like paper , glass, plastic bottles and use less polythene bags . They should start protecting the environment by avoiding plastic materials. Also , pollution control boards should be very active . People have to follow the instructions carefully and take action according to that.
It is apparent that bad habits of parents will lead their children to behaving in similar way . So, the main job of parents and guardians is to educate their young to be a responsible human beings and to be aware of the concequences of Pollution . Also , people should avoid excessive use of idling of their automobiles . Moreover , they should choose environmentally friendly cleaners. furthermore , they must participate in programs related to conserving energy . At last , they should purchase energy sufficient bulbs .
In conclusion , nothing will improve or work if we do not change our lifestyles . People should be amiable towards the environment . A responsible citizen is the one who respects the place he lives in. Good manners and friendly behaviour is a must .
- Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it? 78
- In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes which have occurred ? do you think these changes are positive or negative? 61
- The state of the enviroment is now a cause for concern in all countries across the world Apart from government measures ad policies what can individuals do on a personal level to combat the negative effects that our lifestyles have on the enviroment 74
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, as to, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86917266846 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4668149191 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0526315789 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3684210526 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118121938244 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387754353692 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703996894977 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836926297061 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08556517528 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.