Stress is one of the most serious problems that our world is facing today. To be more specific,there are several tensions and concerns that cause anxiety to people. I will discuss major factors which lead them to this situation and will recommend some solutions to mitigate the problem.
Initially,People are leading a very busy amd uncomfortable life. Nowadays,it is observed that individuals have a lot of financial,personal and health problems. It is a fact that the increasing unemployment rate is becoming a worrying issue. For instance, the citizens of Greece come up to face problems related to high tax imposition and insufficient salaries. Another factor that concerns family oriented people is the burden of their children upbringing and schooling. Lastly, senior citizens deal with issues regarded to health while they also are stressed about the low retirement salary they get. Generally, individuals live an anxious and stressful lifestyle that can lead them into depression.
Although, it is difficult to change human nature but there are some methods to reduce the problem. Firstly, people should spend time with their beloved. Moreover , they should do some meditation such as yoga in order to relief from stress and avoid busy life. Furthermore, Government should set strict rules and take effective measures. I believe, authorities must improve the lifestyle of people by using alternative solutions. Lastly, it is very important to engage in physical activities such as walking and running. Therefore, people can avoid sedentary lives and also they will be mentally and physically healthy.
In conclusion , stress can lead to depression and can cause mental disorders. I think , people should start caring more about their health and avoid taking anxiety. Life is very short for crying, so live your life peacefully and happily.
- In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes which have occurred ? do you think these changes are positive or negative? 61
- The state of the enviroment is now a cause for concern in all countries across the world Apart from government measures ad policies what can individuals do on a personal level to combat the negative effects that our lifestyles have on the enviroment 74
- Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it? 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3724137931 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91937580143 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624137931034 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.1098796438 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.9 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189925144663 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511326099523 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639352389361 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123310133784 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054917950557 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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