Strick teaching matter from parents leading to radical actions from children can be settled by more flexible technique like bargaining. What is your view point?
There are various reasons why I think that bargain is not a good way to instead of strict teaching. Firstly, not all parents know how to negotiate with their children. They are too young to fully understand what adults mean. For example, parents know the effect of watching too much TV on health and say to their children about this many times, but they can't understand and give up this habit. Additionally, making a lot of deals with children will eventually lead them to develop a habit of being followed by others. In case the parents don't buy a favorite toy for their child, he will cry or scream. And his parents were forced to buy the toy to stop these activities. That will form a thought in these kids' heads that if they cry, they get everything they want.
Instead of strict teaching, parents can give some small and suitable punishments. For instance, if a child disobeys to adults, his parents can stop providing pocket-money a month or prevent him from going out about two weeks. Besides, parents also should let their child know how to make sure his benefits as requiring him do any household chores that you need to be joined his friend's birthday party on the weekend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...hildren about this many times, but they cant understand and give up this habit. Addi...
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Line 1, column 540, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...followed by others. In case the parents dont buy a favorite toy for their child, he ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61611374408 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4090658567 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654028436019 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9877983063 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5454545455 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124743451992 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469698287904 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312175308223 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970659542054 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100429555251 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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