Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a widespread belief that students ought to be responsible or paying full cost for their tertiary studies. While university should prioritize expenditure for students, I believe that each individual also has to provide funding for their own further education.
On the one hand, it is true that educational institutions should allocate resources to their students. Firstly, if students do not have to concern about their financial issues, especially tuition fees, they will totally concentrate on their education and find it easy to keep up with their studies. Some deprived students these days are likely to find difficulty in earning a living and paying for their tertiary education. They are usually forced to pay off students loan and work their way through college. If this tendency continues to occur, instead of focusing on studying, those students will waste more time to make money and drop out of their university.
On the other hand, I also argue that parents should support their students in paying tuition fees. In terms of national budget, recently, local and national authorities have to deal with host of issues in their country, problems relating to environment, healthcare system or industries need to be high on national agenda. Therefore, if the authorities spent more money on education and supporting universities, they have to impose spending cuts and raise more taxes to meet the need of other aspects of society. From the educational perspective, paying for their own fees can stimulate the commitment of each student. They will also try their best in order to avoid wasting their parents’ budget and falling behind with their studies.
In conclusion, it seems to me that although the university should be responsible for supporting their student’s financial background, each individual must spend more money on their education to reduce the burden of their authorities.
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- It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than that of young people in many countries in the future Do you think it is a positive or negative development 11
- Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries Why is this the case Is it a positive development 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30263157895 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79505400123 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555921052632 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1066369715 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289255703268 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123932901267 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675046752819 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21214398078 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492900127154 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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