students should pay the full cost of their own university studies, rather than have free higher education provided by the state.
Admittedly, tuition fee is one of the most challenging problems students experience during education at universities. Meanwhile, the governments due to financial resources are not capable of covering the charge of all applicants and somehow attend to escape from burden by taking unfair policies. In this essay I aim to expand this issue relatively as follows.
In one hand, individuals who have to work hard out of campus to supply the expenses rather than studying more the lessons usually suffer from the lack of time, as a results, unpleasant results are only one of the consequences of this matter. Additionally, rate of educational costs are rising every semester which leads to abandoning the academic training which spontaneously provides further difficulties in the near future. In other word, they are likely to find a job instead of being graduate with annoying debts.
On the other hand, some citizens believe that the states are responsible to cover the whole cost including the tuition, accommodation and food for students because the governmental organizations demand high tax for urban services and free educations. To make salient example of this issue I would contend that few affluent countries just provide educational services for knowledge-seekers at both level of domestic and international.
All in all, it is by no means insurmountable if charity foundations as well as long term loan help universities to admit more and more students freely who want to be taken advantage of higher educations. I must argue that it is definitely inevitable which numerous people will be deprived to continue their education despite of support of different sources.
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- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
- Some employers want to be able to contact their staffs at all times, even on holidays.Does this development have more advantage than disadvantages? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...sually suffer from the lack of time, as a results, unpleasant results are only one of the...
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Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...espite of support of different sources.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31954887218 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09975343639 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676691729323 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9162326123 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.5 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179333002304 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523636861933 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036199994121 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881154460474 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280960051078 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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