The latest research has shown that the rate of criminal activities are relatively lower among the well educated people. This essay completely agree that the mischievous activities can be reduced by promoting better education programme and social behavior classes for the wrong deed people when they are under police control.
The people who performed the unethical activities like robbery, killing etc can become better human being if they are provided with well-being classes when they are in prison term. The educationist and the consular should understand their state of mind and accordingly define their training programme in which they should be provided with some degree education with some better perks. For example- In US many local police station ran the classes of phsycology for the people and ask them to obtain the degree so that the sentence of prison can be reduced.
In addition to the degree certificate classes, the social behavior programme also plays a vital role in improving the attitude of the criminals when they are in public. The people who perform wrong deeds are mostly having uneducated family background or friend groups. The influence of family directly affects the behavior of the person hence improving their interpersonal skills bring some ray of hope for them. In India, government initiate free counselling sessions for the uneducated families so that they can send their kids to schools or social development classes which really helps to improve the society.
In conclusion, to make the society better for living and crime free, we need to invest in better activities which help the young generation to take better proper decisions when they are in difficult situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, hence, if, really, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26642335766 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57402784996 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558394160584 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.247068847 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.3 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249901641594 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099629031091 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633349972738 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147905018234 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648329834734 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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