Nowadays, the adolescents prefer to live independently with their friends once they complete their secondary schools either in sharing apartments or by independently renting it. This essay outlines that the independent living has many plus points like better learning experience and real life exposure.
The decision by the young generation to live separated from their parents once they grow makes them strong enough to tackle every situation. They have a different learning experience once they start doing part-time or full time jobs to earn their living. These exposures make them confident enough to take better decisions in life. For instance, In US 59% of the part time jobs are done by the college students who spent their earnings to pay the rent.
In addition to this, Parents would also be pleased with this practice since they can enjoy their own lives by having more time for themselves. Not only would they have more financial flexibility due to independence of their children, but they also don’t have to change their habits in order to adapt to the new generation’s lifestyle. For instance, it allows many old people to travel around the world, which would be impossible if their children were to stay with them after finishing high school as they can spend their pension on themselves rather than taking care of their kids.
To conclude, spending the adult life after separating from parents helps children to become more independent, better decision maker and confident This positive development outshines all the negative development.
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- All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them Do you agree or disagree Give your opinion 93
- Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework.Do you agree or disagree? 78
- In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents home once they finish school They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends Is this a positive or a negative development Give reasons for your answer and include 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...s many plus points like better learning experience and real life exposure. The decision ...
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Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...tuation. They have a different learning experience once they start doing part-time or full...
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Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ence once they start doing part-time or full time jobs to earn their living. These exposu...
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Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...in life. For instance, In US 59% of the part time jobs are done by the college students w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22709163347 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64155744757 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637450199203 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2610393719 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.2 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366481341065 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141859117302 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813867991822 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199133611643 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765215390973 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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