Success is often measured in wealth and material belongings. Does wealth measure success? What makes a successful person?
Man has sought to define such a vague concept as success from immemorial time. Some people believe that a successful person is determined by the material possessions that they own I doubt it. In my opinion, the key criterion for success is an ideal balance between a favorite job, a supportive family and sound health.
Firstly, despite the fact that the richest people in society are considered the most successful, they might not have the same feeling about themselves. People often set goals to attain intangible goals and the impossibility of their possession can lead even the wealthiest people to depression. For example, in the memoirs of Jordan Belford, the most influential Wall Street’s brokers, he confessed that he was despondent, as he could not find true love. Thus, people may have different goals and true success in this case is regarded as the achievement of their aims but not obtaining new cars and apartments.
Secondly, a number of other factors, apart from wealth, attributes the success of any human being. An occupation that brings satisfaction might provide a feeling of being important and complete. In addition, a supportive and united family also plays a motivating role in helping a person to reach their purposes at the earliest. For instance, J.K. Rowling admitted that after several publishers refused to issue «Harry Potter», it was her family and passion for writing that helped her overcome all adversity and ultimately become so successful. Thereby, only a combination of several factors, including the employment and the affectionate family members can shape an individual into a high achiever
Summing up, financial security is not a guarantee of a successful person, since money cannot buy such intangible values as love, family and solid health. To my mind, a sense of accomplishment through contentment is the real measure of being successful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... satisfaction might provide a feeling of being important and complete. In additio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21967213115 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89281050077 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.899573541 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.461538462 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193352006964 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647713137193 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621949139316 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117929708036 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627592098244 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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