Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, A great deal is crack by successful sport players and earning more money compare to other important professions such as doctors, engineers, and officers. I think above statement is completely justified.
First and foremost, in my nation many sport professionals are available, while they are not earn more money from good deals like advertisement, short film, convocation ceremony, and inauguration; however, a great deal taken by only successful sport professionals such as M.S Dhoni, Virat Kohli, P.V Sindhu, Marry Kom, Bajrang Punia and many others are available as a world level like Linol Messi, Cristiano Ronaldo, Sarena Williams, and Rafel nadal. Additionally, players are not play whole life, they plays for only short term as five or ten years only after that they will be retired so that, they are all earn lots of money from extra work. To exemplify, The Hindu Times an Indian newspaper in July 2019 reported that Virat Kohli charges 1.35 crore for every post sharing on Instagram.
On the other hand, other important professions are also important for any nation because of them are earn money from only professional work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'earned'.
Suggestion: earned
...onals are available, while they are not earn more money from good deals like adverti...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and inauguration; however, a great deal taken by only successful sport professio...
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Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...uccessful sport professionals such as M.S Dhoni, Virat Kohli, P.V Sindhu, Marry K...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...onals such as M.S Dhoni, Virat Kohli, P.V Sindhu, Marry Kom, Bajrang Punia and ma...
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Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'play'
Suggestion: play
..., players are not play whole life, they plays for only short term as five or ten year...
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Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'earned'.
Suggestion: earned
...tant for any nation because of them are earn money from only professional work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, while, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22580645161 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70312507832 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.577508225 49.4020404114 252% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.0 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243857627772 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12232063701 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091928379447 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198890109585 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573024469329 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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