Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Some people think it is unfair for professional athletes in other important fields to have higher incomes than professions in other important fields. While others argue they're deserved to have a such deal. For me, I also suppose this is fully justified.
I can understand why some people feel unfair. A lot of individuals contribute their knowledge, efforts for their country, such as doctors, engineers, scientists. Some save people's life, others update human life but their salaries are much lower than some sporters.
However, sportsman also gain achievements for their local or even the country through the competitions. When they win, they bring pride for the community and feeling accomplishment. Moreover, athletes have to exchange a lot. First, they need to convince their parents to allow them to pursue their passions, even stuck in choosing between dream and reality. Second, although having a little gifted talent, they have to no-stop effort so that makes their body abnormally. Last but not least, their contributions to sports only continue until down age or bad health, and their youth also isn't anymore. On the other hand, sports now make a top concern to the world. So the government and businesses investigate money to train and pay for the sportsman. These funds are also supported by sports lovers and audiences watching competitions.
In conclusion, it is reasonable as paying for professionals a great deal of money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... professions in other important fields. While others argue theyre deserved to have a ...
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Suggestion: they're
...er important fields. While others argue theyre deserved to have a such deal. For me, I...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...age or bad health, and their youth also isnt anymore. On the other hand, sports now ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21982758621 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79953163549 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1718408511 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6875 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231880914984 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786704557411 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979112293983 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175515221231 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112260545247 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.