Task 2: In the future, there will be a higher proportion of older people than young people in many countries. Is it a positive or negative development?
It is predicted that the percentage of the elderly in the future will be dominant compared to youngsters in many nations. In my opinion, this is by no means a beneficial growth in consideration of the drawbacks the situation brings.
On the one hand, I can understand that why the population of older people compared to young people is increasing at an alarming rate. First of all, the pregnancy rate in many countries have sharply decreased. This is because with the advancements of technology, people now have different mindsets in comparison with the past as many individuals consider raising a family unnecessary. As a result, the workforce is not renewed with youngsters and adults. Additionally, as life expectancy increases, so as the amount of pressure put on the next generations. With extending life span and other illnesses such as depression and obesity, this trend is predicted to continue.
On the other hand, I fully concur with the idea that this trend will do more harm than good. Firstly, this will put a heavy toll on a country’s economy since governors have to pay an increasing amount of pension to older people which could have been used to invest in the development of projects benefiting citizens. Secondly, the lack of young people may result in the reduction of the available workforce. Consequently, many positions will be vacant, it will be harder for companies to employ people and the production rates will be lowered. Ultimately, this may cause a crisis that affects the country’s economy.
In conclusion, I consider this a negative development seeing its impact on the population and the nation’s economy. Immediate measures must be taken to close this case once and for all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07394366197 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97337212226 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552816901408 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1055011187 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327966174765 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910511093299 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852596838848 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170457036149 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992567587778 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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