Today’s modern era, overpopulation is the major problem in the world. Some people tend to deem that, Cities and towns should have a gardens and playgrounds for people. In this essay I will elaborate reasons why it is important with proper examples.
To commence with, if cities have a ground and parks so it diminishes the ailment among people which caused by lack of exercises. What I mean that, parks are the leisure place where people can spend their time by doing different activities. It would be benefited for health. Moreover, one can spend time with their near and dear ones. For example world health organisation stated that the children who lives near parks or garden tend to play outdoor games instead of mobile games which improves their physical as well as mental growth.
In addition, public places bring more benefits for city economy. It may provides work opportunity to the residents. Hence, it attracts more people to visit where different souvenirs earn money by selling products which indirectly affects the city economy. Also, it increases the ratio of visitors which create a huge demand of stuff. It might be provided by different local workers.For example, the Rose Garden in Gujarat, the yearly rate of people who visit it at around 70% which contribute huge amount in government budget.
To recapitulate, parks and gardens have a huge benefit towards people as well as economy of the city which comprise health benefit, money benefit and many others.
- Task 2: It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 84
- Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty percent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife around the world? 56
- Task 2: It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- Nowadays, the increasing amount of garbage (Waste) is a real concern. Why is this happening? What can be done to resolve this? 67
- Some people think governments should spend money on faster means of public transport However others think money should be spent on other priorities such as the environment Discuss both views and give your own opinion 100
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, i mean, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07723577236 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54149579431 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617886178862 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7030671696 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2142857143 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140900695058 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522238221668 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478912979394 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907611002268 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455172859362 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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