Many people claim that the construction of new public spaces such as squares and parks is very crucial. While the presence of these projects could bring about several benefits, I would argue that all towns and cities do not have to build large public spaces.
To begin with, constructing public spaces has many advantages. First, since public spaces are usually equipped with an abundance of sport facilities, this would stimulate physical activities of rural residents who usually have sedentary lifestyles. Consequently, there would be remarkable enhancements in both their mental and physical health. An excellent example of this is Nguyen Hue square in Ho Chi Minh city. This public space attracts not only hundreds of visitors a day but also a considerable number of people going there daily for physical excises. Second, since most tourists are enticed by locations that offer high-quality public places, cities which invest money in building recreational spaces for the public are likely to witness growths in the quantity of tourists. As a result, the economies of these cities would be significantly boosted.
However, I think that the government should not force all towns and cities to build parks and squares. Firstly, metropolis like Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh city are currently facing shortages of land which result from overpopulation. Therefore, finding a land spacious enough to construct recreational places for the public appears to be a challenge. The city authorities might decide to demolish plenty of houses in order to make room for public places, which makes many people lose their houses. Secondly, since constructing and maintaining these places require a great amount of money, cities which have weak financial conditions could encounter imbalances in budget for other sectors. If city officials decide not to build these places, more money would be invested into other urgent needs such as medical care, drainage system and unemployment.
In conclusion, while I recognize that building public spaces is important, I strongly believe that the construction of these places should be based on the current situation of each town and each city
- Some people think the news has no connection to people s lives so it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programmes To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Task 2 It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks Do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
- Many people say that we have developed into a throw away society because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of To want degree do you agree with this opinion 85
- Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies Do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people think that young people should follow the tradition of the society Others think that young people should be free to behave as individual Discuss both views and give your opinion
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31778425656 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75430750417 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4821923857 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30533791606 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100846171864 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578719244848 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197386339184 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746030039036 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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