Tourists visited the famous monument to enjoy the beauty of nature and to know the stuructural history. In today's era, majority of tourists are taking keen interest in visiting the historical places and museums rather than local individuals. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons and solution to tackle with this obstacle in the subsequent paragraph.
There are several reasons as to why visitors, instead of local people, visit to gallery and archaeological ruins. To begin with, globetrotter are easily handle the huge expenses of entrance because of enough knowledge but a common man is not able to afford the high cost of entrance which discourage the masses to visit such places.
Moreover, because of layout of museums and historical houses remains unchanged through the years, local visitors who may have been to these sites for at least once in their younger years, feel more bored and unattractive by going such places. Furthermore, individuals have more hectic schedule and they are making their future bright by earning more and more money. Consequently, youngsters never know about the past events.
Several measures can be prompted to promote local's attendance rate at buildings for historic relics and museums. Firstly, to changing the perception of such places as sites for only monotonous activities. Should civic events including wedding, anniversaries and concerts should be allowed to held in these locations, they would attract substantial public attention to historical values. Secondly, organizing a trips by schools and colleges at least twice a year, definitely increases the curiosity among youth to know about history of different places. Thirdly, to provide a discount on tickets are also initiate the poor section of society to see the view of museums and historic sites.
To sum up, individuals should be aware about the culture of their own country to become more expert in collect historical information which is possible by only going such historical monuments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'handled'.
Suggestion: handled
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Line 7, column 605, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'initiated'.
Suggestion: initiated
... provide a discount on tickets are also initiate the poor section of society to see the ...
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Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... To sum up, individuals should be aware about the culture of their own country t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as to, at least, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34069400631 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74080031862 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611987381703 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8078450505 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.928571429 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312054032431 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918044659849 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688394480331 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149799505153 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509032454256 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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