Technology is probably the greatest inventions of the century. Technology has revolutionized the concept of communication. As the technology growing day by day, the way of interacting with others it also changing. This essay provides some empirical evidence to support this statement.
To commence with one of the paramount advantages is a mobile phone. These are the gadget that everyone has nowadays. And they can interact with the person orally and visually, who is sitting on another side of the world. Nevertheless, Social networking sites are a platform where people are communicating with each other without knowing them personally. They share their memories and experiences. And people also creating some virtual pages or groups which can join by the person has a similar interest.
On the other hand, another sided some inevitable effect, one of it is people started living in their virtual world and stop to meet others personally. Teenagers spend time online on this social networking site, by which they were not able to concentrate on their study. And some criminal also uses this technology to do fraud or any other criminal activities.
To conclude, I would reiterate my discussion is that everything has some pros and cons, it also has but their advantage outweighs the disadvantages. It is good to stay with technology, but it also important to do not mess up their personal and social life because of it.
- Task 2: Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negativedevelopment?Give reasons for your answ 56
- Some people believe that watching TV is good and makes life more enjoyable; others, however, think it is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion. 56
- In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight.What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest? 61
- Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices, like smartphones, tablets and laptop computers. Do the advantages of such development outweigh the disadvantages? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12875536481 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90324869594 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579399141631 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.097246549 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184865217155 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573964204028 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478011805933 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111304278243 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448549132193 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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