Task 2: In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Recently, purchasing a home is a vital issue for the majority of individuals and they value it over renting one. This matter is happened due to several reasons, however it is significantly as a result of psychological and money matters. In my opinion it is considered a positive trend that should be encouraged and the reasons will be explained below.
First of all, buying a house is widely spread nowadays because of the psychological impact. In other words it gives the owner/ possessor a sense of ownership and security to be living in his own property. In addition, it has another significant aspect which is social status. For example, owing a home contributes to a steady marriage and a being satisfied with one's life. So, it has to do with social matters, as well.
Secondly, homeownership is essential for money matters. To illustrate, it is assumed to be a positive trend because of its value as a long- term investment for the family members. By having one's own home, no need to worry about the monthly rent, for example.
As for homeowners, whether the have a steady job or not, they have the chance to consider different job opportunities without the fear of being homeless. Therefore, it has a significant effect on the financial status and being free from rent responsibility.
In conclusion, owing one's private home is essential for many reason, though the most important one is to lead a happy life. it is necessary for psychological aspect and money issues, hence, I am of the belief that, a large number of people tend to make it as one of their future priorities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: one's
...ady marriage and a being satisfied with ones life. So, it has to do with social matt...
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Suggestion:
...herefore, it has a significant effect on the financial status and being free from...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...though the most important one is to lead a happy life. it is necessary for psycho...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...issues, hence, I am of the belief that, a large number of people tend to make it as one of their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82481751825 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9317361731 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0642410725 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240824083929 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732721321761 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459988174616 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129245388587 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371546991713 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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