• Task 2: Some people think that it is a good thing for senior management positions to have much higher salaries than other workers in a company.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Senior management positions should be given much higher salaries than other workers in a company. In my opinion, I totally concur with that because of some reasons I will mention below.
On the one hand, it is reasonable for senior managers to have higher incomes than other workers because they have adequate skills, knowledge and experiences over others. On average, it takes a few years for a person to reach management positions so a senior manager experienced a variety of challenges, arduous tasks during this time. Thanks to that, they formed a wide range of knowledge, skills and consequently have potential, significant abilities compared to other workers. Hence, it is unquestionable that they can devote more substantially to businesses with their outstanding skills.
On the other hand, senior management positions require more responsibilities. They must manage, monitor tasks of workers and ensure that everything is in a good way to bring benefits for companies. It is an important role in a successful company so they deserve higher wages than others. Otherwise, their obligation is also deciding strategies, activities for others to follow, which determines the fate of businesses. In order to complete these tasks, they need to spend a lot of time, have stress. Because of that, a management position should certainly be a well-paid job.
In conclusion, it is advisable that senior managers are paid higher than other workers in a company as they possess more significant abilities and stressful possibilities than others. However, high salaries paid for managers should be considered at a reasonable level based on their results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...oncur with that because of some reasons I will mention below. On the one hand, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...easonable level based on their results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33716475096 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01177696508 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9054115447 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344905626067 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121833172378 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947705310299 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233900130611 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183818129204 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.