Task 2: Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old house in the local areas, while other think that people should have freedom to build house of their own styles. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some argue that new home in the locality should be built to match the traditional building style of that area, whereas others think that people have the right autonomy in choosing their own style. I agree with the view that occupants of a house have the freedom to decide how it should look.
On the one hand, there are strong arguments that the new housing should follow a traditional style in the residency. Practically, several architectural measures are conformed to certain geographic conditions of the nation. Indeed, in Japan, where natural disasters namely earthquake or tsunami usually affect citizens, the national government have to take control of structural qualities to reduce losses of human and property if accidents occur. In term of cultural values, conventional counterparts remain the beauty of cultural identity, which becomes a tourist destination in the country and generally over the world, which reduces an unemployment rate in the local area. Take Hue province as an example, one of the most ancient cities in Viet Nam, the authorities encourage local people to preserve an antique house or construct new house in ancient style, which made Hue as one of the most renowned tourist destinations.
On the other hand, there are many benefits to building a home as the needs and wants of its owner. Firstly, by being freedom to show the owner characteristics, which make their homes a distinctive comparison to surrounding others. People build their house for different purposes, which might serve their demand or express their vision and taste as well as their richness. Particularly, the elder tends to prefer bungalow to a three-storey house, or the young family usually consider a small and affordable house with a public playground for their children; meanwhile, the upper class might choose penthouse or villa. From the respective of construction cost, materials of modern homes are more reasonable than its convention due to the fact it is easily obtained and produced, like iron or steel while building conventional counterparts made from wood which is hard to find and affect to natural resources.
While it is easy to follow the historical style of building homes, it is more important to allow people to have the freedom to decide to build their house as their favours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, well, whereas, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15425531915 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80296312001 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8313235788 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.076923077 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9230769231 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349104972196 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121622736623 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110055503576 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254481044391 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118424007028 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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