Task 2:
The consumption of the world’s resources such as oil or water is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are the causes and solutions
In our routine life, natural resources such as: oil, water play a vital role. we as human beings can not imagine our living without these sources. but as we know that, these materials are being used at an immensely growing rate and outpaced the sustainable availability in ecosystem. this essay will analyse not only the induces of this increasing rate of consumption which are, constant enhancement in population and poor infrastructure of countries but also the solutions to decrease it.
there are many reasons of overconsumption of matters. Out of all, first and foremost one is the increment in man community. it can be explained that, due to massive enlargement in the society, utilization of minerals is also raised. People are using fossil fuels to fulfill their basic needs as well as to improve their lifestyle. For instance, natural gas is consumed to cook food which is also used in vehicles to satisfy our luxury. In addition, another fact is poor infrastructure of nation. To elaborate this, there are many underdeveloped realms, who are still using the primitive techniques to generate the power. Consequently, they ended up with the overuse of assets.
To control this rising expenditure, many solutions can be adopted for the factors mentioned above. first of all, individuals need to understand that these substances are not renewable. so they should not spend that much of amount to complete their lavish demands. Furthermore, in this progressive era, developed states should promote their new tactics to the backward domiciles. so that, by accepting those technologies, they can reduce the usage of raw material.
In conclusion, with the fact that minerals are used above the dangerous level, public awareness can brin this amplifying rate down and secure the future of civilization.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-12-15 | Nensi Patel | 78 | view |
| 2018-11-07 | hoangquang | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hout these sources. but as we know that, these materials are being used at an imm...
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...s can brin this amplifying rate down and secure the future of civilization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, still, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23024054983 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94660665163 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621993127148 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.115569506 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5555555556 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103621742162 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250755004922 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475991176523 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065134754507 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718208439985 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.